Persuasive writing

So last week my teacher said we had big 4 practice so I said that I will persuade him that we shouldn't do big 4 practice and this is what i came up with.

I Believe we shouldn’t do big 4 practice

Because we deserve second chances in even though we have had warnings.

My thoughts show that most of our class should have their last chance.

I Believe that we shouldn’t do big 4 practice

Because about 90% of this class was doing the big 4 but if it was just 60% of the class then you could keep all of us in.

My thoughts show that the whole class shouldn’t stay in.

I Believe that we shouldn’t do big 4 practice

Because some of us has sports at lunchtime and they might be the people that  didn’t do anything

My thoughts show that most of this class is innocent