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Friday, June 10, 2016

My narrtive writing

Whoosh!  The boat was rocking roughly in the dreadful sea . It was the dutch man that was shaking the boat, he had evil eyes it looked like a rabbit, it scared the men that was on the boat, they were like little babies .
“ahahahahaha the dutch man yelled.   ‘You scram men “  “I will  take your soles away from you”. They felt terrified because there future  were in risk . They screamed their heads off.




“HAHAHAHAAHAHA”  the dutch man said, you guys are whipps my friends well last more than use.  All the men were  crazy ,they were running around like someone was going to do a surgery on them “ ( Crying) “  The dutchman said  use guys need some poison on yourselves to stop running. WOOOOOO the men cradled around to hide  “Oh no” my besties here hidee  dutch man was saying it like he's saving their lives  “Ohhhh hello my friend “ ohhh hi i heard you were making trouble. “Oh no” said the dutch man ohhhhhh what's this oh its my toy boat okay then i’m gonna go now bye then bye said the dutchman's friend

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